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26 June 2013 @ 12:15 pm
Fic: Darkness Unspoken  
Title: Darkness Unspoken
Fandom: BtVS
Rating: PG
Character: Angel, thinking about Buffy
Concrit: Please, in Comments
Disclaimer: They aren’t mine, not yet, but they will be… once I’ve taken over the world. Bwah-ha-ha!
Word Count: 130

Note: The original prompt at Open on Sunday was lack, but apparently I'm the one lacking something: when I tried to recall the prompt I came up with lock.
Note: You may notice a similarity to my story titled Dead Kennedys. The story started taking a different path but I liked both versions.

The steel bars were nothing next to the thin band of light that angled across the floor. His fever rose as that golden beam, impenetrable as a raging wall of fire, inched closer and closer. Heat and light brought hallucination: Buffy outside the cage. She stood facing him but her head turned when he looked up. She wouldn't even catch his eyes.

A great abyss lay between them: the chasm of darkness unspoken. Mere words could never bridge that gap, could never explain the flamboyant pageant that comes from living without caring, without a purpose, without a soul. Buffy could never understand, never forgive,  never forget what she could never be told. How could he have ever thought they could have a life together when one of them was dead?
 
 
 
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velvetwhip: Primitive by Lilbreckvelvetwhip on June 26th, 2013 07:51 pm (UTC)
This is terrific!


Gabrielle
Dragon's Phoenix: Francine bliss facedragonyphoenix on June 26th, 2013 11:06 pm (UTC)
Thanks. ;-)
odalis888odalis88 on June 26th, 2013 10:12 pm (UTC)
This is great :) Short and sweet.
Dragon's Phoenixdragonyphoenix on June 26th, 2013 11:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you. *grins*
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